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Question by imgonnawalkytalky:

How is my paragraph on same sex marriage?

This is the conclusion paragraph of my paper on same sex marriage, which I'm arguing for. I wanted this to be a strong ending. How is it? What should I change?

We come to the turning point in history where people are now being given the chance to change the ban against same sex marriage. Many Americans have a skewed idea of what a homosexual is, when really they are not any different than everyone else, accept for their sexual orientation. There is no biological evidence that homosexual individuals are abnormal or any less of a responsible parent as heterosexuals, but people continue to believe these ideas. In states were same sex marriage is illegal, same sex couples have a feeling of shame following them. People shouldn’t feel shameful about their sexual identity, which is innate and natural, shame should be director towards those who have commit serious crimes. Our nation has come a long way from slavery and racism, but intolerance still exists. Homosexuals are fully functioning human being, capable of raising children and having a functional home life. Same sex marriage should not be taken away from two people who want to commit to a relationship with the person they love. We should have the choice to marry the person we love; we should let our children have the choice to marry the person they love; we should support our community and let our fellow citizens have the choice to marry the person they love.




Best answer:

Answer by Zelkova
Obviously Steve D is an idiot and doesn't understand the concept of a consensual relationship but your paragraph seems fine. There are a couple places where the grammar could be better but overall it's good :)

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